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In this article i will show you exactly how to take your current ad copy and make it so good, people say "Shutup and take my money already"
3 reasons your ad copy doesn't SELL, and how to fix it today
Weak Headline
Would you rather read:
"Is Your Hair Falling?! This Is For You..."
or
"Are you facing something called Hair Loss? We're here for you..."
You'd probably pick the first one, it's short, attention grabbing and speaks directly to the target audience.
Weak Offer/No Offer
Adding an offer to your ad could single handedly put you ahead of 99% of other ads, why? because NO ONE HAS AN OFFEEEEEEEEEER!!
I've witnessed businesses averaging 13 leads/month go above and beyond 100 leads/month.
Only because they added what i call, a solid offer.
Alien speech
Whether you believe in aliens or not, if they were real, i can promise you, this could only have been written by an alien:
"ATTENTION! we are offering a new empowering service that will change your life by immasureable amounts and make you trillions of money!"
"Sign up now to join the revolution and take your business to the next level!"
Now if you're an alien, this would make you take action on the spot,
buuuut you're probably a human being.
Aaaaaaaaaand, the only thing a human would do after reading this, if they even managed to read on without dying...
is probably NOTHING.
So, let's write like you're speaking to another human in the bar,
Take charge in your language and see your sales and results soar.
Talk soon,
Don
P.S. Want to know how I’d make sure we’d eradicate waffling and keep your prospects glued to their screen, unable to stop consuming your content?
Get in touch with my agency today. If we’re a good fit I will personally take a look at your company and your marketing, come up with a strategy of what I’d do differently and discuss it with you in depth on a call.
No cost, no obligation.
If you want to work together I’ll tell you exactly how that works, if you don’t want to work together that’s fine too. No hard selling, no pressure, no annoying sales tactics.
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